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TOPIC: 2nd attempt

2nd attempt 6 years 7 months ago #5795

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Hey guys, ive uploaded my tune to soundcloud, now this is only my second attempt and ive only been using ableton for a month, so any feedback or criticism or anything would be awesome thanks! Ive had no professional music training (as you can probs tell lol) and all im trying to do is teach myself how to create music by just watching video tutorials (awesome tom thanks :)) and reading info on the net.

soundcloud.com/marcobee/2nd-attempt

Thanks again dudes :)
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Re: 2nd attempt 6 years 7 months ago #5801

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Hey, man! Props for getting your work out there! I know how it feels to be out there with no prior training (Except for Tom's of course) and learning everything from youtube. DON'T QUIT! My only advice after listening to this tune is that you need to cover more of the sound spectrum. For example the first drop at 1:15 needs more weather it be some sort of crash cymbal, added hi-hat pattern, bass riff etc etc... something to progress the tune. However that's just my opinion, I am in no way a professional. Look forward to hearing more stuff from you, man. Keep it comin'

Cheers:)
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Re: 2nd attempt 6 years 7 months ago #5805

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Aww thanks so much for your advice mate, it really means a lot that youve took the time to listen to it :) i appreciate it so much. Do you think im coming along ok from what youve heard? Im a newby and only been doing this about 5 weeks, but im determined to crack it!

Cheers mate, spot on!
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Re: 2nd attempt 6 years 7 months ago #5808

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soundcloud.com/marcobee/2nd-attempt-2

I altered it mate, see what ya think :)
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