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TOPIC: Feedback Request

Feedback Request 1 year 4 weeks ago #25868

  • phhelou
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Hello everyone,

So I just finished my first ever track from scratch, and I'd love to hear any kind of constructive criticism or plain opinions I can get. I'm still very new to the world of digital audio production, so don't expect much :p.

soundcloud.com/pierre-h-helou/1st-try/s-tX8fm

Thanks!
Why, you ask ? Well, why the hell not ?
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Feedback Request 1 year 4 weeks ago #25869

  • Karl37
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Hi and welcome.

I really like this, it has bags of atmosphere and actually really good for a first try.
For me the only feedback i would offer mix wise is that it gets a bit murky around your bass and drums, you may want to clear some of that out, give your drums a bit much presence too. You can apply some sidechain to the bass to duck it out of the way when the kick comes in, adding saturation to a bass gives it a little colour which helps also when separating it from the kick. Also do some subtractive EQ and make decisions about what is more important in you track and what you want to highlight and stand out.

Nice track though ;)
Check out my Soundcloud - soundcloud.com/k37productions
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Feedback Request 1 year 3 weeks ago #25871

  • djeyemaster
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Hey there,

Whatever feedback they give you, LISTEN! My productions have gotten way better than I've imagined since I first made a track! Karl has the ears!

If you want to take a listen to some of my productions, feel free!

Tha Abacus's Soundcloud Page

Keep on doing what you love, you will go farther than normal! B) :silly:

Respectfully,

Tha Abacus
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